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This is a gorgeous poem, and I absolutely love this stanza:

There may be

a natural explanation

to this mystical exchange

but let’s not delve into that.

Let’s relish the vibrant place

we have stumbled into,

and live from this moment

into all other moments,

knowing this is as

real as your hand

in mine.

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Stunningly beautiful!

PS. Substack does need a few more formatting degrees of freedom especially for poetry!

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Agreed! Thanks Reena!

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I look forward to reading more, both poetry and process.

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Thanks Andi, glad you’re here and good to submeet you!

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Submeet. Good one! Thanks to @Winship for recommending your site.

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Aug 17, 2023Liked by Brian Funke

Sitting on my front porch now reading this lovely poem. Beautiful

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I’m glad! It seemed like a good day to publish this one.

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Aug 17, 2023Liked by Brian Funke

Beautiful! Both the moment and the description

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Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

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